I have inserted a new photo taken this morning below the original so the differences can be seen. Not sure its an improvement but wanted a little more separation between the bell of the daf and the petals.
Painted this from a reference photo I took a couple of weeks ago. The reference photo is here.
It is on an 1/8th sheet Fabriano Aristico watercolor paper, painted to the edges. This is a practice piece trying to learn more about watercolor.