I worked on Carol's drawing before she took it with her this morning. As you can see I deepened the shadows which slenderized her face more, moved in the hair line just a bit on each side and added more height to her hair at the top. I think the hair line around the face is reading better, don't you. Now this looks like Carol. Thanks for looking!
Next, Lawrence's wife requested I darkened his hair on his drawing just a bit. Will get that done so it can be delivered tomorrow. Here is a photo of Lawrence holding his drawing. It isn't the best photo but it certainly captured his pleasure with his present.